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Erin on 4 November, 2013

The fireworks
Sparkle. Shoot Shiny
Sizzle. Crackle
Colourful. Bang
Glitter. Twinkle
Flash. Glow.

Mrs Paddock
Mrs Paddock on 4 November, 2013

Wow, could you put any of these into a sentence Erin?

Mrs Paddock
Mrs Paddock on 4 November, 2013

I love the word flash Lily, could you put it into a sentence? Which verb would you use to describe the children at a bonfire party?

Fireworks sizzle.
Bonfires burn.
Children…

Erin on 5 November, 2013

Fireworks bang in the sky and glitter sparkle and twinkle.
The fireworks sizzle and crackle and they shoot into the sky and are colourful in the dark.

Madeleine on 6 November, 2013

I found these verbs in your poem:
Burns
Jump
Crackling
Spitting
Hissing
Popping
Leap
Bop
Leap
Dance
Whizz
Zoom
Sizzle
Soar

Madeleine on 6 November, 2013

Fireworks bang, dance, criss-cross, zoom and sparkle!

lily on 6 November, 2013

children giggle!

Heather on 11 November, 2013

Wow those fire works sparkl like the North Star bye for now . Heather jane Swarbrick

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