WALT: Use adjectives to add detail to our writing.
- Mrs Paddock
- Mrs Rain's Class
- 7 Comments
WALT: Use adjectives to add detail to our writing.
I like how you have used a alliteraion for the title.
The big hands were puthing quick.
The big red lether puffers puffed up Walles soft cumpfey pillow for him.It was extreemly funny when Gromit was pretending to be lots of different sheep.To jump Gromit stood on a big tall lancher so walles could cont sheep to sleep.
The snoozatron is made of smoth leather and hard wood the leather pufs a pillo up and gromit dressed up as a sheep so walce could count how many times gromit went up until walce fell asleep but when walce fell asleep gromit didn`t stop jumping!
It was slow and noisy and shiny red.
ryan
the clip was really funny.
Mrs Paddock
You’re description of the soccomatic was really powerful Ryan, could you have a go at describing the snoozatron?!