Today is the day we start to write the first draft of our adventure stories but before we do lets think about how we can make sure they are the very best they can be! Last week we collected and used better word than ‘Next’ and today we are going to explore better words than ‘said’.
What words did you find in your book?
Can you improve these sentences…
“I’m hungry,” said the cat.
“Take this bag of goodies to your Grandma’s,” said mum
“What have you got in your bag?” Said the 3 scruffy pigeons.
“mmmmm, chocolate,” said Charlie!



Jack
I’m hungry meeowd the cat.
Take this bag of goodies bellowed mum
What have you got in your bag shouted the 3 scruffy pitons.
Mmmm chocolate dribbled Charlie.