What reasons would you give to persaude me to invest in your invention?
- Mrs Paddock
- Mrs Rain's Class
- 6 Comments
What reasons would you give to persaude me to invest in your invention?
what have you been doing you seem to be busy bees today why did wallace and gromit say dont forget to bring cheese to recharge your brains what does cheese do ? pursueding is easy if you know how remember to use WOW words and emotive words to pull at your adiences heart strings goodvluck xxx
We are starting it today Hannah, you could pop down this afternoon and have a look at how we are getting on!
Hannah what do you mean when you say ’emotive words?’ Could you come and explain it to us please?
emotive words are word that tuck at the heart strings.eg crucial and rapidly or in your case these items are rapidly selling sorry i cant pop down i have only just read the comment maybe another day xxxx
I really enjoyed visiting your class today and looking at your amazing inventions. I hope you will let me know which invention wins so that I can invest! You have worked really hard – well done.
Wallace and Gromit
How exciting!!! We were very impressed with your adverts for the Bread-o-matic and have lots of orders already! You will be great at this task as long as you remember what skills you need! What did you include in your adverts for us to make them powerful? Don’t forget to take plenty of cheese breaks to recharge your brains!
*Gromit “Always listen to the members of your team…the best work is team work! Isn’t that right Wallace?!”
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