Last week we looked at using adjectives to describe nouns, adding detail to our writing.
Have a look at this picture.
What nouns can you see? Write them down.
What adjectives can you choose to describe the nouns?
Use your nouns and adjectives to describe the picture and make it come to life for the reader. Y6 are going to be leaving you feedback on how effective your descriptions are!
I can see a butifull water fall and I can see bright pink flowers.
I can see huge watefull. I can also can see enorms mossy rocks.
I can see sun old rocs and I can see sum shiny pink berries.
I can see very sharp rocks at the bottom of the shiny water fall.
I can see some rocks and pink flowers. also a siney water fall and green leafs. they are huge bumpy grey and white.
The crunchy leaves are waving in the breasing wind.
I can see a butifull waterfall and see butifull bright flowers and roks.
The pink flowers are good because they are brite and the leafs are hanging from the trees.
There is a blue shining waterfall and the big wet leaves they are green.
The rocs are bumpy also it is sharp and white and brawn. There are bright pink flowors but not just that there are old bumpy rocks.
I can see a fresh waterfull and bumpy rocks.
Leaves are wet rocks are wet and leaves are brown. I can see sparkly water splashing down in the distance.
I enjoyed sticking picture for the Romena story.
I can see clear running water and pink bright flowers.
Their are curved light green leafs. Also their are some dusty slipy rocks and some pink flowers.
The rokcs look carved and look like they have been there for a 100 years.
The leaves are dark green and the stones are hard bolderes . The pink flowers look byootiful and the rocks look ruf and hard.
The water fall is sparkling and there is some huge boulders. There is some clean green leaves and there is some beautiful bright pink flowers.
The rocks are slipry and dandros. Also ther is lots of tangled up leaves.
I can see crunchy green and light dark white spoty leaves and grey huge big shaped bolders.
The leevs are green. There is a water fale wat is shiny and fresh. The rockes are slipi and green.
The waterfall is colerfull because when you can see behind what is shining. The flowers are shing becose it was raining.
The water fall is coming down in three lines. The big bushes are crunchy. The rocks are grey big and bumpy.
The flowers ar a bright pink and the lievees ar bright shads of green and difrant shaips. The water fal has fresh water.
The trees are wet and the roks are green with moss. Also the rocks ar veri slipi.
The leavs are relly green . Their is lots of gint roks that are light grey and the flowers are pink and tiny.
The rocks are humongous.
The plants are long and windy and green with bright pink flowers.
The waterfall looks very high and the fresh water is pouring down.
I loved how we did the writing.
NOUNS ADJ
beautiful green leaves beautiful
crystal clear water fall colourful
bright sun peeking at the green leaves astounding
unstable grey rocks amazing
I really love dicriptive writing , we do it at the start of the literacy lesson to get are brains going , I find it really fun 🙂
Jacob B
I can see a really big waterfall and bright shiny pink flowers. The bumpy rocks are very old and rusty.