Today we have been looking at ways to open our sentences. We have been experimenting with ‘unfortunately…’ as an opener. Have a look at the image we used and read some of our examples. What do you think of our work? Could you add a sentence of your own? What other openers could we have used?
Unfortunately martin saw his girlfriend and got his tail stuck in the mouse trap then his x girlfriend stole the cheese
I love doing unfortunately coz it is fun and it helps me do better writing like I did on Wednesday and that came out good I got students of the week!!!!!!:-)
Grace H, I’m really glad you can see how useful the ‘unfortunately’ game is. Your writing has been fantastic this week, keep up the hard work!
Evie, great use of ‘unfortunately’, but poor Martin!! Remember capital letters for proper nouns.
Grace P, would it be unfortunate if Martin got the cheese?
Well done girls!
Thank you miss Hayward can we do one on Monday?
I really enjoyed doing this because it was fun and it really got me thinking of a good idea.
unfortunately he got the cheese but mouse got him
Ozzy thats awkward!
even though im not in this class you have some great sentences.
Thanks Jade.
Ethan – a good effort, but proof read your work. Does your sentence make sense? Miss Hayward
this looks superb miss Hayward i hope your y6 have a great time at thorn-bridge i wish i could be there with you great job hope your voice gets better soon miss Hayward when i get back instead of Spanish i will be speaking Australian (hehe) see you in a month
if you have and homework questions to ask me ask me online i will be on again, see you soon
Grace H told me about unfortunately and it sounds great
Can we do alot more unfortunatleys and hot seating please.
Unfortunatley Martin turned around and found a wrestling ring and the ultamite heavyweight champion bet him up and his ex girlfriend got the cheese
Why cant we do any more?
Grace P
Unfortunately mike,got his cheese and ran away.