How would describe this place?
Think about effective adjectives, adverbs and verbs. Could you use similes, alliteration or metaphors?
I look forward to reading your ideas! Miss H
How would describe this place?
Think about effective adjectives, adverbs and verbs. Could you use similes, alliteration or metaphors?
I look forward to reading your ideas! Miss H
Wow Natalya! What a detailed description. You have thought carefully about all the things you can see in the image. I like how you have explained your vocabulary choices, isolated is a fantastic word. I like the use of similes at the end of your description, the idea of the coulda dancing is unusual and creates a clear picture in the readers head! Well done.
Spooky
Dark
Old
Huge
Attractive
Haunted
Creepy
Spooky
Enormous
Scary
Old
Creaky
Dark
There are ghosts in the house
That’s how I would describe this creepy house.
Old,
Spooky,
Dark,
Huge,
Attractive,
As tall as two elephants,
Autum,
It is affective who would want to live there not me,
It looks like a house tha somebody has wrecked it,
The clouds look like a person moving in the sky,
Some interesting ideas! I like your simile Bronwyn, it gives a clear idea on size. Great vocabulary choices from all, keep up the hard work! Miss H
AGREED!
Haunted
scary
Terrifying
creepy
gules and ghosts waiting in weird looking shadows
ready to get us (what ever is inside!)
it will keep us there forever and ever!!
it gives me the shivers
I hope what ever is in stays in
I hope it doesn’t get me
Holy hotdog! Good description Alesha
it makes us quiver with fear
Haunted
Creepy
Spooky
Enormous
Scary
Old
Creaky
Dark
That’s how I would describe this creepy house
natalya
I’d say you’d describe it like old
Spooky, as tall as 2 giraffes, huge, I think its autumn because all the leaves are off the trees and it looks like there’s going to be a storm because the clouds are dark grey. It looks a bit windy and isolated (which means all alone) and it’s like rather a spooky person lives there or nobody lives there either. it’s dark and nighttime its really effective so who’d want to live there not me .the clouds are dancing like a real person.